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[Sungazer (OM)]

Nice track =]

Definitely one of your better tracks, very interesting in it's own way.

A few points stick out, the kick kinda hurts my speakers. =P

Also, there are a lot of very noticeable Nexus presets for me.

Quite repetitive, but not so that it becomes boring, but I'd love to hear some other stuff going on, more varied progression, etc.

A good track, definitely. Keep putting out this stuff, it's nicely made!

- Britt

Kr1z responds:

-Kick hurting?
I put alot of time in layering and tweaking that kick, I'm glad how it stands out well in the track.
If you want me to change the kick, tell me something more concrete than 'the kick kinda hurts my speakers' .. like, be fucking helpful for once.
I don't see what's wrong with my kick.
I sent it to Karco and he found nothing wrong with the drums. If i have to choose between Karco and you, I choose Karco.

-Yes its nexus, like, whatever. I layered, modded, filtered, arped and sequenced the hell out of it till it sounded like i wanted it to sound.
The pluck aint the dance seq pluck preset. Although, I looked it up and it sounds pretty much the same :/
I can't work with 3xosc or some other VSTi. Sorry :$

I always try not to be too repeative. I'm sorry i failed. :( What about my interlude? My pad breakdown? My pluck breakdown? My anticlimax? My melody variation part? I've put alot of effort in the progression :/ I don't see how I can make it more varied.
Again, if you want me to change something, you could propose some examples. That'd be actually helpful.

A good track?
Why is this score the lowest while it's "Definitely one of my better tracks" ?

It would be nice if you'd not only tell me what I did wrong.
It's helpfull though! But - why don't you ever mention what I did RIGHT?
I mean, for instance, the mix. I worked my ass off on mixing the full track.
Same goes for the melody. No comments? :$ What about the transitions, the fx used, the hat line, the chords, the other crap? :P
I'm happy with the result.

Your review makes me feel bad.